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    Story Project

    Posted by VannillaBear - December 11th, 2008


    I dont really think writing is my calling XD but this is my attempt at a Dr Seuss-ish type thing

    Of course! Now i can see what you see
    An amazing insight into what could be!
    "well this is just me..." said the girl with the bee
    With a twinkle in her eyes, and a spring in her step.
    We charged out the door, now we were free!

    "Nope we still ain't free" said she with the bee
    "Do you see that thing upon the cliff?..."
    "I think i do", i said with glee
    It was the free and it spoke to me
    "Come up the cliff and have a sniff"

    Strange i thought but hey,
    the girl thought it was okay
    up we climbed, higher and higher
    the sky grew dark, the weather was dire
    at the top, i held my breath
    i could smell the scent of death..

    I was scared
    the girl just stared
    the free whispered,
    "there'd be no one spared"
    The girls body fell,
    what a terrible smell
    the free took her soul,
    and it swallowed her whole.

    Rooted to the spot in fear
    it free sneered, "the end is near"
    and as it touched me, everything was clear
    Of course. Now i can see what you see.
    An terrible insight into what could be.


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